Monday, March 25, 2013

Photojournalism.

For this look at photojournalism, I picked photos from two different sources. The first three are from the New York Times (http://lens.blogs.nytimes.com/), and the last two are from the Boston Globe photo archives (http://www.boston.com/bostonglobe/photos/archive_galleries/).



A protester in Sanabis, Bahrain, was engulfed in flames when a shot fired by a police officer hit a gasoline bomb in his hand during clashes between antigovernment demonstrators and security forces.
What initially struck me with this photograph was the sheer vibrancy of the flames. It isn't very often--at least, for me it isn't-- that you see these sort of explosion-induced flames in any sort of real world situation. My attention was immediately drawn to the hovering ball of fire, and it wasn't until after that I noticed the pair of legs emerging below it. To me, this was what made the photo absolutely stunning in the most horrific way. No matter how long you look at that ball of fire, you can't discern a human figure within it, but given the legs still safe from flames, you know that there has to be someone inside. I think this photo conveys an emotional appeal to the reader, especially given the story behind it. This photo shows a man's destructive devices turned against him, quickly destroying him instead. I think that in some sense, this photo is a really startling way of showing us how our lives can change in an instant.




Staff Sgt. Zebadiah Thomas, of C Company, 3-7 Infantry, watched a stairwell as his squad checked the rest of the house for a fleeing suspect.
The composition of this photo was what really got me. The vivid and colorful flowers pop against the white of the walls, and then in the middle of it stand a soldier with his gun raised. You can't really get more opposition than that. In general, flowers are symbols of beauty, life, and peace. The first time I looked at this image, I immediately thought of how hippies used to put flowers in the guns of soldiers, and in some ways, I feel like this photo is doing the same thing. Juxtaposing an image of war against one of life creates a sense of tension within the photograph, like they don't belong within the same room. I think this photo is an intimate one because not only are we given a look into someone's private residence, but we are also given a look into this one soldier's moment as he completes his duties. I think I want to know if the soldier understood the irony of the situation, too.





At least 10 people were killed when a car bomb exploded in Mogadishu, the capital of Somalia.
I know there's a lot of people out there who think black and white photos are more powerful or compelling than color images, but honestly, it's photos like this that make me think otherwise. There's so much that photojournalists accomplish with the color composition of their photos, and most of the time it's photos like this that grab my attention. What stuck out to me was the way the color of the flames match the color of the woman's clothing, and the way the bright white of the ground contrasted with the dark smoke rising from the car. This is both an intimate and emotional image. We can't see the woman's face, but by her posture, we can tell that she's grieving and in disbelief of the devastation that has just occurred. By capturing the wreckage, the photographer makes an emotional appeal to the reader, and in capturing this woman in such a heartbreaking moment, the photographer brings the reader closer to the subject.






A cloud of smoke and ash fills the sky after the eruption of the Chaiten volcano in southern Chile. The eruption, which began May 2, spewed incandescent material and blasted ash some 20 miles into the Andean sky, forcing authorities into a complete evacuation of the area.
By this point, I've realized that all of the photos I've chosen are images of things that I just wouldn't see in everyday life-- and let's face it, everyday life wouldn't make such an interesting photo gallery. Anyway, that's why I picked this photo. It's just so incredible, and unlike anything I've ever seen. I love that way the sunlight breaks through the huge cloud of smoke and ash, the way the cloud divides the image, and the way the houses at the bottom are so untouched by the event happening right behind them. This photo touches on the emotions of the reader because it gives us a scope of the power of nature, and how it can create something so awe-inspiring, but at the same time, so incredibly destructive.




Disputed Presidential elections in December of 2007 led to a months-long explosion of violence throughout Kenya's western Rift Valley. Initial political protests aroused latent ethnic, economic and land disputes, shattering the relatively stable east African nation with some of the worst violence since independence in 1963. As rioting and tribal killings intensified in the provincial capital of Nakuru, looters were caught and beaten by private security guards in the weeks after the elections.
I looked at the photo gallery that this image was featured in, but no matter which other pictures I looked at, my mind kept coming back to this one. If I may play the part of the broken record, again it's the colors that really stand out in this one. Surprise, surprise. I guess that's just kind of my thing. In this picture, it's the way the blood in his mouth and the whites of his eyes stand out against the dusty brown all around him. This is an extremely intimate and emotional photo. It captures this man in a moment of absolute terror, the subject of a harsh act of violence that most of us will never have to endure. Personally, it leaves me wondering what happened to the subject of the photo. Did he live, or was his fate much worse than what's pictured in this photograph?

Tuesday, February 26, 2013

Lead re-writes.

Swing Your Sweetheart

For Kaitlyn LaCourse, swing dancing is all about new experiences.

"It's a challenge that forces you out of your comfort zone," said LaCourse, president of the UNH Hep Cats, "but also it's fun to be in a new environment."

The UNH Hep Cats, the university's swing dancing club, provides this opportunity for all students, no matter their age, gender, or skill level. "We keep everyone up to date," said LaCourse, "even with zero experience."

Freshman Isabelle Molle, an admitted klutz, praises the group's inclusiveness. "Here it doesn't matter," said Molle. "The people are nice and the music is fun!"

The Hep Cats are inviting all students to join them for their first event of the year, the Swing Your Sweetheart Dance taking place in the Strafford Room on Feb. 15. "Anyone looking to expand their cultural values, learn something new, or just a fun night with friends should stop by," said LaCourse.

The Hep Cats have been on the UNH campus since the early 2000s, and offer students the chance to take a blast to the past through various styles of swing dancing from the 1920s to the 1950s. The group's favorite is the Lindy Hop, a popular partner dance. "Basically picture the prom scene from the movie Grease," said LaCourse.


UNH VOX

UNH student Hannah Dooling has always been inspired by her female role models. "My parents divorced when I was really young," she said, "and I lived with my mom who was a strong independent woman." It shocked her to find out that UNH had no organization in which students could discuss contemporary feminist issues.

Wednesday, February 20, 2013

Comparing leads.


I chose to compare the various leads of the story on 20-year-old Ali Syed, who shot three people before killing himself in Orange County, California, early Tuesday night. Here are the different leads I found:

Seacoast Online:
"A young man shot a woman to death in a home early Tuesday then went on a spree of carjackings and random shootings across Orange County that left two more people dead and three others wounded before the gunman killed himself, authorities said." 

The Boston Herald:
"A violent rampage that left four dead in suburban Orange County began in the pre-dawn hours Tuesday when a 20-year-old killed a woman in his home and sped away in his parents' car, authorities said."

The Boston Globe:
"The violence stretched across 25 miles in Orange County and was as brutal as it was fast-moving."

New York Times:
"A 20-year-old part-time college student was responsible for an hourlong early-morning shooting and carjacking rampage in Orange County on Tuesday that left four dead, including the gunman, the police said."

CNN:
"In the middle of a shooting spree that killed three people and unleashed terror on Southern California motorists Tuesday morning, Ali Syed told one of his carjacking victims to walk away, police say."

Most of the leads seem to be summary leads, like the ones from Seacoast, the Boston Herald and the New York Times. They give the basic information and the pertinent details of the story: the who, what, where, and when. However, the ones that stuck out the most to me, are the ones from the Boston Globe and CNN.
The Boston Globe opted for a delayed lead with this story, only saying that "The violence stretched across 25 miles in Orange County and was as brutal as it was fast-moving," in a sort of scene-setting opening. I think this lead sets the Boston Globe apart from its competitors for this story because it sets a certain tone for the story and sends shills down the reader's spine. While summary leads are still well-written, they start to sound like a broken record after reading multiple summary-style leads for the same story; they simply don't have as much of an impact when you find yourself reading the same information over and over again. With a story as shocking as this, you don't want the reader to not care.

CNN's lead is a little different as well. It seems as if it's going to be a summary lead, highlighting some main facts of the story (the incident, the perpetrator's name, the location, and the time), it does something that the other leads do not. In this lead, we learn that "Syed told one of his carjacking victims to walk away." I think this one small difference makes a huge impact on the rest of the story, and how it compares to its competitors. It gives the reader motivation to keep reading because of the interest in this one detail that the other stories don't mention. Why did Syed give this carjacking victim the option to walk away after he had already killed three people? What does the victim have to say about it? With a lead like this, the reader feels compelled to keep reading in hopes of finding answers to these questions. With a summary lead, I personally don't feel like this level of interest is aroused. Summary leads gives you the basic information with little perspective, which is why it's important to create a lead that sets you apart from all the other reporters.

Leads are important because it's in this paragraph that many readers decide whether they want to keep reading--I know it's that way for myself, at least. Leads need to have a point of interest. With the summary leads in this particular story, leads that read the same way are going to lead to stories that read the same way. But, the Boston Globe and CNN provide a different perspective. While the stories may share the same content as the other stories on this incident, they present the information in such a way that the reader is kept interested in the story, and is more likely to use that same source for other stories on the same topic. Presentation is key with stories like this, which are heavily covered by multiple sources. You want yours to stand out, and there's no place better to do so than in the lead.


Monday, February 18, 2013

Grammar wars.

The quality of this picture is pretty terrible, which I suppose is what I get for taking a picture of my laptop screen with my phone, but it's still so hilarious.


Sunday, February 17, 2013

"It's news to me."

An interesting thing just happened in my apartment (for anyone that knows me, I'm aware that's not saying a lot, but bear with me). We were discussing the endangered species list, and we were all pleasantly surprised to find out that the eagle has finally been taken off the list, so we got very excited decided we should throw a party celebrating this exciting news.
Then, we realized it was taken off the list in June 2007.
This resulted in the discussion of a party celebrating news that isn't new, to which my roommate Courtney replied, "It's news to me."
I think that the phrase, "it's news to me," is an interesting idea. After all, isn't it called "news" because, well, it's new? After this whole bald eagle debacle, my roommate Liz tweeted, "Speaking of news, in recent news, I just realized why the news is called news."
If something's new to you, can you call it news? Or are you stuck with simply calling it "new information"? The more that I think about it, the more that I realize that lots of things I consider news aren't really news, they're just new to me
To be honest, I'm not sure where I'm going with this. It's just something to think about during those times of the day when you find yourself exploring the deep crevasses of your mind. Like when you're waiting for food. Those are dark times, soldier. Stay strong.

Sunday, February 10, 2013

Nit-picking.

This week's copy editing assignment is proving to be difficult. Extremely difficult.

It's flat-out making me crazy.

There are just so many mistakes, and a lot of the writing is so convoluted and poorly written that I can't even begin to describe how to fix it, other than simply saying, "Please rewrite this whole damn thing." I'm finding it difficult to make the sentences flow together, let alone make them into a coherent story. A couple of times, I've edited an entire paragraph, then reached the end and had to write, "Is any of this relevant or necessary?"

It's hard to resist the urge to completely rewrite this story, but I suppose that's ultimately the job of an editor--not to replace the writer's words but to improve them.